revised tanka:
january ballet
of dancing on ice
no one has trained me
how to fall or how to fail
gracefully
original version:
surviving the latest storm
I slide down the ice
on the driveway
and regain my footing
in the snow
revised tanka:
january ballet
of dancing on ice
no one has trained me
how to fall or how to fail
gracefully
original version:
surviving the latest storm
I slide down the ice
on the driveway
and regain my footing
in the snow
built in 1883 the narrows covered bridge its lifespan stronger than any words I have to describe it